Saturday, September 3, 2011

The Two Armies

Once upon a time there were two armies.  They fought almost every day.  One day the two armies fought and fought  for 3 days straight. The next day the armies rested.  And the next day, and the next.  The next day the armies came out to the battlefield and fought and fought.  The bad side tricked the good guys by hiding behind large boulders so the good guys couldn't see them.  When the good guys got close, the bad guys came out and surprised them and scared them away.  The good king was really mad so the good guys made a plan, but the bad guys had a spy in the castle and heard everything.  The next day, the bad guys won again because they knew the good guys' plan.  The next day, the good guys had a good plan. They found a huge helicopter, bigger than a house, and put a very big bomb in it and flew the helicopter accross the sky and dropped the bomb and "BOOM!" The helicopter droped the bomb right on the bad guys.  Half of the bad guys died.  And the battle ended.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Collin! I read your story today and I thought it was great. Keep writing; you are very good at it!

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